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Grey by ~FatKat:iconFatKat:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


Grey.
Grey is the storms trapped inside his eyes.
Grey is the sound of the wind rushing through a hollow tree as it moans with sorrow.
Grey is the insipid scent of the moss after a summer rain.
Grey is the rough and patchy blanket worn by a young girl.
Grey is the salty taste of death still lingering on the lips of those who have lost.
Grey.
Grey is the sky, just before a rainbow.
©2006-2008 ~FatKat
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This is a piece I wrote in seventh grade,
yes it's that old,
but I still like it.

Enjoy

>edit
>I submitted it as romance on purpose...
>Although, I don't know if it applies
>It seemed romantic to me
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~lovesucks333:iconlovesucks333: Oct 30, 2006, 7:40:49 PM
bittersweet...I like it! <3

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That's MAD wench to you!!!
~corpselover7:iconcorpselover7: Nov 1, 2006, 6:00:52 PM
OH! I love this one so much! Thank you for putting it up!

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A thought, even a possibility, can shatter and transform us. -Friedrich Nietzsche

-Moony
~FatKat:iconFatKat: Nov 1, 2006, 8:16:55 PM
Thankyou,
MOONY!

perhaps it would be good if I could write better poetry for Lily, as you saw the last was qquite dreadful...

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Bringin' Chivalry back, one good deed at a time...
* turin-the-forsaken

Think of all the beauty still left around you and be happy.
Anne Frank, Diary of a Young Girl, 1952
~FatKat:iconFatKat: Nov 1, 2006, 8:17:46 PM
Thank you so muchly!

I hope that I'm not getting to far behind in art...

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Bringin' Chivalry back, one good deed at a time...
* turin-the-forsaken

Think of all the beauty still left around you and be happy.
Anne Frank, Diary of a Young Girl, 1952
~lovesucks333:iconlovesucks333: Nov 4, 2006, 5:05:59 PM
erm...we just glazed our pottery, and next week is the last week to work on our portraits in class...stippling is so effing tedious...DX

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That's MAD wench to you!!!
~corpselover7:iconcorpselover7: Nov 19, 2006, 5:32:11 PM
It wasn't too dreadful at all.
You're a much better poet than me, Prongs, and a much happier one at that.

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A thought, even a possibility, can shatter and transform us. -Friedrich Nietzsche

-Moony
~pyromanaic:iconpyromanaic: Jul 18, 2007, 3:29:10 PM
Interesting, I like the line about the girls blanket, it adds a nice texture...

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You are FAKE! Like plastic.
~FatKat:iconFatKat: Jul 18, 2007, 4:41:40 PM
Why, thank you. I wrote this some long time back, but I wanted to appeal to each of the senses. It may have even been an assignment in school, I can't be sure...
Thank you. I truly like this because it reminds me to be optimistic.

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Think of all the beauty still left around you and be happy.
Anne Frank, Diary of a Young Girl, 1952
The visionary lies to himself, the liar only to others.
Friedrich Nietzsche
~pyromanaic:iconpyromanaic: Jul 18, 2007, 6:10:03 PM
thats a nice twist on the whole grey is a sad, drab color thing...

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You are FAKE! Like plastic.
~FatKat:iconFatKat: Jul 18, 2007, 7:34:52 PM
Heh, yes... I like to think that things get better. I don't even know why I'm telling you all of this... Even if things seem really awful, I never once consider suicide because, you know, if you don't keep on living, you'll never get to see things get better. You won't get to see the rainbow, you only see the grey.
Well, that was completely unnecessary. I am glad you enjoyed this piece, "poem" if it can be called that.

Have a lovely day.

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Think of all the beauty still left around you and be happy.
Anne Frank, Diary of a Young Girl, 1952
The visionary lies to himself, the liar only to others.
Friedrich Nietzsche
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