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Grey.
Grey is the storms trapped inside his eyes.
Grey is the sound of the wind rushing through a hollow tree as it moans with sorrow.
Grey is the insipid scent of the moss after a summer rain.
Grey is the rough and patchy blanket worn by a young girl.
Grey is the salty taste of death still lingering on the lips of those who have lost.
Grey.
Grey is the sky, just before a rainbow.

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This is a piece I wrote in seventh grade,
yes it's that old,
but I still like it.

Enjoy

>edit
>I submitted it as romance on purpose...
>Although, I don't know if it applies
>It seemed romantic to me

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:iconstarwish65:
wow! thts excellent!
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:iconquestiun:
It makes me think of the scent of rain, and reminds me that thunderstorms are such beautiful weather...there is also something a little more special about it when first reading it, thinking it was written by an adult, and then reading the comments and being told a seventh grader wrote it...

"Grey is the salty taste of death still lingering on the lips of those who have lost."

a child wrote that, understanding what it meant.

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~xAerisx Nov 28, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful~ I love grey. :3
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:iconfatkat:
Mm, thank you so very much.
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:iconlickurlips:
nothing is black and white, all we see are thousands of shades of grey.
i love this!
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:iconfatkat:
!
:heart::hug::heart:
Thank you so so so much!
I'm glad that you enjoyed my piece and I appreciate the favourite.
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~iAes Sep 13, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh, the last line of this is absolutely brilliant. :D
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:iconfatkat:
Thank you so much!
I wrote it all for the last line, really. I came up with the words when the prompt was suggested and then wrote the piece backwards, crafting each line after the next.
:heart:
Thank you very much for adding my humble poem to your favourites.
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~iAes Sep 13, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Oohooh, it's very nice. ;)
Must've been an interesting writing experience...
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:iconfatkat:
Thank you, dear.

I suppose it was. I wrote it in a seventh grade English class, so, really, there wasn't very much ceremony in it...
Alack.
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