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Unrequited.
Oh, Apple of my eye, forbidden fruit, you know I'm starving and I'm thirsty, but the branches pull away.
Oh, rosy-red and taunting, flawless skin and flavour haunting, please I wonder now, for what sin do I pay?
Like a candle in the darkness and I like a moth to flame, do chase your sunny beams despite retreat.
Now, I fear my sun is setting and I run toward the horizon, but the quickness of your flee exceeds my feet.
Oh, locks of golden rays and ripened lips,
Why do you so deny my warm embrace?
My words do fill the sails of idle ships,
But cannot lift a feather, in your grace.
©2007-2009 ~FatKat
:iconfatkat:

Author's Comments

A tad old.
Suggestions?
b

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:iconkattlyness:
No suggestions, because this poem makes me a bit giddy, to be honest.
:iconfatkat:
Hee hee hee.
(You are quick, dear)
I thank you most humbly.
:heart:
It troubles me, though, that the characters that I write of always seem to fit his description...
:P
b


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"I don't remember reading the bible verse where Jesus turns water into blood." [link]
~The-Shouts-Club!
:iconkattlyness:
I see no reason why that should be troublesome, really. That's me, though. I mean, obviously.
:iconfatkat:
Pah.What's you is what's good.
So I'm glad.
(It is troublesome because I don't like to be obvious, but I am.)
b


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"I don't remember reading the bible verse where Jesus turns water into blood." [link]
~The-Shouts-Club!
:icondoreean:
You know, only the good poems are a little confusing at first. I had to read this one twice, and think about what I saw in the lines. Fine job! :D

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Why so blue?
:icondojang:
damn but you write well, b.

that's beautiful.

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new, improved, and back from japan!
:iconfatkat:
Don't lie, now, Mister Dojang.
:heart:
Thank you.
b


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"I don't remember reading the bible verse where Jesus turns water into blood." [link]
~The-Shouts-Club!
:iconfatkat:
^^;
I hope I didn't trouble you.
Thank you, though!
:heart:
b


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"I don't remember reading the bible verse where Jesus turns water into blood." [link]
~The-Shouts-Club!
:icondoreean:
You're supposed to trouble me, though! :noes:

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Why so blue?
:icondojang:
i've never lied to you.

np.

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new, improved, and back from japan!

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